Rough Cut 2 - Class Feedback

After receiving our feedback, everyone liked our music choice and said they thought it went really well with the action. However, at some parts of the sequence there was no non-diegetic sound, so Mary advised us to not use any  non-diegetic  sound in the bathroom but at the end when she receives the text message, we should use dramatic music to give a better ending.

We also were told we have to have effects or transitions for our titles, so we will be working on this over the next few days.

Overall we received positive feedback and showed how much of an impact was made by putting sound in our title sequence, which everyone enjoyed greatly.
Next steps:
1) Add transitions or effects to our titles
2 Add more sound layering.
3) In the bathroom include no music and at the end there should be dramatic music.